Blog Entries #1

Keun Yil Rhoo

Paul Kang

English2

22 June 2007

Blog Entries #1

Teenagers' misaccepting the gender

These days, the sexual crimes are committed highly frequently. In proportion to that, the adolescent crimers, have doing such a percussive things, are rapidly increasing. The more time have gone by, the lower the ages of those committers have become. Not only the lowness of the age to perpetrate the sins, also the shocking way to do those is serious. They perpetrate the offense thoughtlessly and in a group reflecting the juvenile-culture that behave all together ("Ddorae Culture")

The most effective reasons of this situation are vast amount of incontinent materials and juveniles' recognizing the gender mistakenly. As the internet developed and people turned to be able to express (write, draw or manufacture, etc.) freely, juveniles could contact with many products including pornography and recognized codification through those things. Limitation to keep them admitting those smutty scene as knowledge has been existed, but hasn't be able to stop the curiosity of juveniles. Therefore, the education is more important than just protect them from those obscene data.

Sex education for teenagers is enforced in the school, but most of all students didn't pay attention to the education. Many students feel they don't need that education quickly. Besides, information about their body and coitus is needful and sensational but boring. Those who have experienced once or more the goatish medias and pictures believe that those things are more realistic, even truthful. I fact, however, it isn't. Juveniles misunderstand what is actual and right gender. They don't know why all their bodies are valuable and how to keep the bodies in a healthy condition, both physically and mentally.

For those reasons, adults have to educate them. If juveniles grow to know the information that is the most important thing and should be preceded any bawdy manufactures, the future society of the juveniles will be sound.

College Apprlication Essay #2

Keun Yil Rhoo

Paul Kang

English2

23 June 2007

College Application Essay #2

Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence.



Sometimes, I feel that albums in my room shout to me, my mind, "See us. We have your past, loving memories in many pircutres." Then I pull out my albums and open those, with no hesitant. I smil as I see and find my figures as a child. One of the most special albums is that about my graduation of elementary school. Everytimes I see that, the pictures remind me a friend. She had a significant influence on me. Maybe she has been influensing me still now.


The friend's name is Park Ji Young. I saw her first when I was a 3rd grade student in elementary school. She was pretty and confident. Also, she was very active and expressed her feeling clearly. In contrast, I was inactive, has no confidence&expressions. I aspired to be a person like her. But that year, she and I were jus classmates, not friend.


When I become a 4th grade sudent, I met her again in same class. I was very delighted and she was also, delighted about that. In the year, we were best freind each other. We did all together; do team project as one team, act in same club, and learn sitting next to, expecially in P.E. class. She was very good at sprots, opposite to me. Playing callyball with her, I had confident about me.


Like that case, being with her, I felt that I had been being changed. After meeting her I could express my feeling frankly; when I wanted to laugh, I laughed. when I was annoyed, I showed my anger. Another impact that she gave me is to cmmunicate with and be familiar with other people. Before being acquainted with her, I was solitude and enjoy thinking&being alone. But I was alterd, thanks to her. She broke my own world and pulled me out of my own space. All impacts from the time that we were together absorbed to me.

College Application Essay Question

Keun Yil Rhoo

Paul Kang

Enlglish2

14 June 2007

College Application Essay Question


4. Describe a character in fiction, a historical figure, or a creatice work (as in art, music, science, etc.) that has had an influence on you, and explain that influence.

College Appication Essay #1

Keun Yil Rhoo

Paul Kang

English2

13June 2007

College Application Essay #1

Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.



When I was a elementary school student, I didn't like to present in front of many people and have much opportunity. I couldn't have confidence about me and my presentation and I was afraid about all people's seeing and focusing on me, thinking whether I had been taking mistakes. I wanted to live without special attention from other people and in quiet enjoying my own liberal life.


By chance, I participated in the scientific investigation contest. That, the scientific investigation, was the homework for the summer vacation. Because I was interested in the contamination of Jungrang-Cheon(river), I investigated about that. All process of research was very joyous so that I completed and submitted that work in pleasant mind. Then my work was nominated as a best thing among all students. After I was awarded the prize from my elementary school, I took part in the contest about such things as the representative of the school.


In there, I had to present about my job. I was highly nervous but I wanted to announce and thoght I could do. Because I became enthusiastic in that and desired that many people heard about what I did. Being anxious and thumping, I stood before two interviewers to give out. My face turned greatly red and I couldn't recognize what I was saying during the announcement. However, I finished my publication clearly and felt not only a sense of relief, but delight.


Thanks to the tournament and the experience in there, I found my talent about researching into an environment. And, since then, my feeling difficulty to give out before many people has been decreased. To undergo a big deal, I has become confident and could talk about my opinion, even though many people see only me.